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The Challenges of Starting a Career After Graduation

(1)Recent years have witnessed a sharp rise in the number of college students who successfully start their career after graduation. (2)However, many others fail to do so because the transition from a student to an employee is actually full of challenges.

(3)First of all, you might not be popular with every colleague, which is frustrating for a newcomer of the workplace. So you'd better try to make a good first impression on all of your workmates, especially your boss.4) Furthermore, there probably is a gap between what you've learned at school and what you are required at work. You have to learn actively and quickly, and avoid making too many mistakes. 5 Finally, the low payment for a new graduate and various living expenses make it difficult to make ends meet, so you may find yourself always on a tight budget.

(6) As the old proverb goes, "Well begun is half done." (7) If you can handle these challenges successfully after graduation,you will clear the path for future career development, such as job promotion or starting your own business. (8)So hold on and never give up!

精彩点评

(1)描述现象:毕业生成功开启事业的人数大大 增加。

(2)用 however进行转折,引入话题,提出观点: 从学生到职员的转变充满挑战。

(3)(4)(5)使用 first of all、 furthermore、 finally分 别论述毕业生进入职场后会面临的三个挑 战,层次清晰。

(6)引用古语,增添文采。

(7)(8)提出建议,展望未来。

加分亮点

witness 见证

fail 失败

transition 过渡,转变

frustrating 令人沮丧的

first impression 第一印象

require 要求,规定

make ends meet 收支相抵

on a tight budget 预算紧张,手头紧

handle 处理,应对

promotion 晋升

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毕业后开始工作的挑战

近年来,大学生毕业后成功开启事业的人数大大增加。然而,还有许多人并没有成功,因为从学生到职员的 转变实际上充满了挑战。

首先,可能并不是所有的同事都会喜欢你,这对刚进入职场的新人来说是十分沮丧的。因此,你最好努力给 所有同事留下良好的第一印象,尤其是给你的老板。其次,你在学校所学的知识和工作中的要求可能存在差距 你必须主动并快速学习,少犯错误。最后,刚毕业的学生薪酬较低,各种生活支出让你很难做到收支平衡,所以 你可能会发现你总是手头拮据。

正如古语所言:“良好的开端是成功的一半。”如果你能在毕业之后成功地应对这些挑战,你将会为以后的职 业发展扫清障碍,如升职或创业。所以坚持下去,不要放弃!