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How to Balance Job Responsibilities and Personal Interests

(1)In today's highly competitive environment, the heavy workload makes people out of breath and leaves them no time for their hobbies. (2) Therefore, learning to balance job responsibilities and personal interests is of great significance for modern people.

(3) Here are some suggestions which can help us achieve the balance. (4)In the first place, we should be aware that although work duties are our first priority, it doesn't mean that we cannot explore personal interests. (5)Secondly, it's important to realize that beneficial activities after work help us get relaxed. We can transfer our focus from busy job by reading an interesting book or listening to a favorite song, thereby getting our intense nerves calm down. (6) What's more, find enough time to develop our hobbies by finishing job tasks on time. When working, we should arrange our time reasonably and complete our daily work efficiently, which will give us more freedom to allocate time to pursue personal interests.

(7)In sum, it is absolutely do-able to strike a balance between full-time work and personal hobbies as long as we realize the benefits of cultivating interests and the importance of reasonable time arrangement.

【精彩点评】

① 开门见山，描述现象：繁重的工作使人们没有时间培养兴趣爱好。

② 使用therefore引出话题：在工作职责和个人兴趣之间取得平衡对现代人来说非常重要。

③ 提出自己的建议。

④⑤⑥ 分别使用in the first place、secondly、what's more 具体给出自己的三点建议，层次分明。

⑦ 使用in sum总结全文，再次重申自己的观点。

【加分亮点】

competitive 竞争的

workload 工作量

be of great significance 非常重要的

first priority 最优先考虑的事情

transfer 转移

calm down 平静下来

allocate 分配

do-able 可行的

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如何平衡工作职责和个人兴趣

在当今竞争极为激烈的环境中,繁重的工作压得人们喘不过气来，同时人们没有时间培养自己的爱好。因 此,对现代人来说,学习平衡工作职责和个人兴趣具有重要意义。

以下建议可以帮助我们实现两者的平衡。首先，我们应该明白，虽然工作职责是我们最优先考虑的事情，但 这并不意味着我们不能发掘个人兴趣。其次,很重要的一点是,要意识到工作之余的有益活动可以使我们放松。 我们可以通过读一本有趣的书或者听一首喜爱的歌曲将我们的注意力从繁忙的工作中转移开，从而使我们紧绷 的神经平静下来。另外，通过按时完成工作任务寻找足够的时间来培养我们的爱好。工作时，我们应该合理安 排时间，并且高效地完成日常工作,这将使我们拥有更多的自由来分配时间以追求个人兴趣。

总之，只要我们认识到培养兴趣的益处及合理安排时间的重要性，那么在全职工作和个人爱好之间取得平衡是绝对可行的。