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【1】The Importance of Having a Sense of Family Responsibility

As far as I’m concerned, each of us, as a member of the family, must have a strong sense of family responsibility.

【2】For one thing, the sense of family responsibility is indispensable for maintaining a harmonious family relationship and a stable marriage. A family member with a strong sense of family responsibility always thinks for his family members, and gives warmth and care to the people around him. 【3】When faced with problems and difficulties, he always has the courage to take responsibility. 【4】For another, a person who fails to shoulder family responsibilities is less likely to take on social responsibilities as well as collective responsibilities, because family environment exerts a strong influence on the cultivation and establishment of one’s character, and 【5】if one doesn’t have a sense of responsibility in a small group like family, he will probably be in short of sense of responsibility when it comes to the bigger ones, like companies and the whole society.

【6】In brief, only with a high sense of family responsibility can a person have a happy family and make his own contribution to the construction of a harmonious society.

参考译文 就我而言，我们每个人作为家庭的一员，都必须有强烈的家庭责任感。

一方面，家庭责任感对于维持和谐的家庭关系和稳定的婚姻是必不可少的。有强烈家庭意识的家庭成员 责任总是为家人着想，给身边的人以温暖和关怀。面对问题和困难，他总是勇于承担责任。 另一方面，一个没有承担家庭责任的人承担社会责任和集体责任的可能性较小，因为家庭环境的影响 影响一个人性格的培养和建立，如果一个人在一个像家庭这样的小群体中没有责任感，他很可能在 它涉及到更大的公司和整个社会。

总之，一个人只有具有高度的家庭责任感，才能拥有幸福的家庭，为构建和谐社会做出自己的贡献。 精彩点评

【1】引出自己的观点:每个人都 应该有强烈的家庭责任感。

【2】【4】使用 For one thing和 For another引出家庭责任 感之所以重要的原因。

【3】使用高分短语(be) faced with“面对,面临”,为文章 增色

【5】举例论证观点。

【6】使用nbif引出总结话语。 倒装句式的运用是加分点