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The Importance of Having a Sense of Social Responsibility

[1] As British poet John Donne said,“No one is an island", human beings are social animals who live in groups and work together. Because of this, the importance of having ad sense of social responsibility is fairly prominent,

[2] For one thing, the sense of social responsibility will make us bchave ourselves in public, which is helpful to build a harmonious society. [3] For instance, those with a good sense of social responsibility always pay attention to protecting the environment when they travel. [4] On the contrary, those who lack a sense of social responsibility always put their needs first instead of public environment, [5] For another, the sense of social responsibility is beneficial to our social cohesion. I [6] For example, after the Wenchuan Earthquake in May, 2008, a large number of volunteers with a sense of social responsibility devoted themselves to the relief and reconstruction work in the disaster-affected areas, thereby helping the disaster-hit people overcome the difficulties successfully,

[7] AII in all, if all the citizens have a sound sense of social responsibility, it is hopeful that the society will enjoy a better future, Therefore, let's take our social responsibility and contribute to our society,

精彩点评

[1]引出话题:引用名人名言 “没有人是一座孤岛"表明具有社会责任感是相当重要的。

[2]使用For one thing 阐述理 由一:社会责任感会让我 们在公共场合表现良好，这有助于构建和谐社会。

[3]使用For instance 举例论 证理由一。

[4]用On the contrary引出反 面论证。

[5]使用For another闸述理 由二:社会责任感有利于 增强我们的社会凝聚力。[6]使用For example举例论 证理由二。

[7]用All in all总结全文，再 次重申自己的观点。

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具有社会责任感的重要性

[1]正如英国诗人约翰·多恩（John Donne）所说：“没有人是一个小岛”，人类是成群结队，共同工作的社会动物，因此，具有社会责任感的重要性非常突出，

[2]一方面，社会责任感将使我们在公共场合变得自我敬畏，这有助于构建和谐社会。

[3]例如，那些具有良好社会责任感的人在旅行时始终注意保护环境。

[4]相反，缺乏社会责任感的人总是把需求放在第一位，而不是公共环境。[5]另一方面，社会责任感对我们的社会凝聚力有利。

[6]例如，在2008年5月汶川地震之后，一大批具有社会责任感的志愿者致力于受灾地区的救灾和重建工作，从而帮助受灾群众克服了困难。 成功解决困难

[7]总之，如果所有公民都有良好的社会责任感，则希望社会将享有更美好的未来，因此，让我们承担起社会责任，为社会做出贡献，